The first crusades (Hum)

I am going to write about the first crusades
The first crusade's destination(goal) was to conqueor the Jerusalem.
In the time (1076) All the muslims could not cooperated one another, so the first crusade Alexius I of Constantinople was torturing Muslims, but Muslims could not comport anything. The first crusade invaded "Nikea", and "Antiokia". However there was a whole captain call "Ardemar" in the Muslimsm, but during the time that crusades were trying to invade "Nikea", and "Antiokia", he died. Therefore all the diginities and cooperative minds had gone so fast. Therefore Muslims would not be able to defense that huge offense from the first crusade. Finally the first crusade successed conqueoring Jerusalem. The first crusade invaded inside the Jerusalem castle, and they killed many citizens and stole a lot of money.
Through Siria and Palestine, and some other middle east countries, they became crusade countries.
(P.S - This movie was really hard to understand ,, Therefore I used some resources from internet :)) http://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%A0%9C1%EC%B0%A8_%EC%8B%AD%EC%9E%90%EA%B5%B0.